Losing Mark
It’s a character piece, so we need more character
He’s perceptive, more of this, observe more
Maybe another dream sequence? (MAYBE)
More alone time
More about Mark
More mood and character
Olivia and Rhonda – what’s his deal?
Is he always latching on to people?
Is he trying to forget Olivia with Rhonda?
Is he trying to make Olivia jealous with Rhonda at the end?
Schadenfraude
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